The Beginning(The Fight)

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The Beginning(The Fight)

Post by Jennycat_92 on Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:11 pm

Julian stood on top of the lush green hilltop with her long brown hair blowing in the cool breeze. The sky was ominous along with her mood, she was ready for the fight. This was going to be the fight of all their lives. Julian knew that the Lord had brought her here for this reason. It had only been months since she had arrived in Erislan and had found out the history of her ancestors. From what her grandmother had told her the Valenians were not descended from Adam and Eve.
In the beginning, God had made Adam, and then Eve from one of his ribs. Eating from the tree of good and evil locked their fate, casting them into the world and out of the Garden of Eden and soon following, their son Cain’s fall from grace. But what was never told was the story of the Valenians. Through all this deceit, God knew there was still hope for his creations, they would not all have to fall from grace which is why he created Thelia.
Eden did not just disappear after Adam and Eve left. There were still creatures that lived in the garden, for the garden was perfect in every aspect. God wanted a creation that would love and praise him, and at the same time he would take care of them and love them. He knew that he needed to create something different than human, something more.
Thelia was a new kind of woman. God had made her to be more like him. She was closer to him than any other creature he had created. She was in tune with every living thing. When she was near she could feel creatures’ emotions. She could hear the heartbeat of the plants. She had respect for every creature God had made. Thelia was also connected to the spirit world. Being filled with so much knowledge made Thelia the master of Eden. But God saw that even with all Thelia had been given she was still not complete so he made Caden. This was the beginning of the Valenians. Soon following God knew that his new creation was truly good so he made more Valenians and with it Erislan.
The merpeople came soon after Erislan was created. The magical thing about Erislan is that everyone has an exact time that God takes them no one ever gets killed or infected, they all die naturally. And so the first time that a Valenian fell into the sea, they were transformed into a creature that could survive in the water, for God did not want his creation to die like this. Water is a beautiful magical element that he created to bring life not death. The water in Erislan also did not contain salt, for the sea was where the Valenians retrieved drinking water. And so this is how the merpeople came to be.
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Re: The Beginning(The Fight)

Post by Angie on Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:45 pm

This is really cool. I'm supposing you made up Thelia and Caden? But it's really cool mythology. I can tell you spent a lot of time thinking about this, and it blends nicely into the mythology behind Adam and Even and God and everything lol. You have a way with explaining that doesn't fell like an info dump. I guess that means it's just well written Smile Good job bro. Write more!
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